Lake Michigan in the Morning
I wrote this hiaku decades ago at summer camp.
Recently posted it on Facebook and got no reaction whatsoever.
Let's see what you cultured people think:
Lake Michigan in the Morning
Gray and bored, she sighs
Rhythmic waves onto the shore
Softly begs me, "Wake."
5 comments:
A poetic dawn?
Okay for some reason all I can think is... just jump in that water and you'll be awake - LOL. But it is a very pretty haiku - I like it.
I like it! :)
Nice. A bloom of imagery explodes in my head.
I think you have lame Facebook friends. You should be friends with me.
It's beautiful. It brings to mind sweet images of water.
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